Do you have ANY ideas on this page?

Hmmm..okay..I am trying to open a home based business and designed a web page..I have done everything that the users here on yahoo have requested to try to make it look more professional. Do you think it is okay?..Or do you have any ideas that will make it even better?...THANK YOU SO MUCH..THE YAHOO comunity has been such a HUGE help and I appreciate you all VERY MUCH!

The web page is :

www.jdwebz.net

Do you have ANY ideas on this page?

it%26#039;s okay, but, honestly, it would not attract me to your service. i would do something that seems more professional, like changing the font of your page and adding some more color. i know this site really has nothing to do with what your doing, but this is something that would want to make me purchase a service:

http://www.janielouscakeshoppe.com/

if you have had customers in the past, maybe have some of them write reviews you can quote somewhere on your page. examples of the service you%26#039;re offering would also be nice.

instead of having all that stuff on the first page, i would just sum everything up into one paragraph, so people don%26#039;t have to read as much. if you really need to include all that, i would organize it so the text could be in a scrollbar box with the title above it, and the information inside of it.

but, other than that, i think you are doing a great job with attracting customers. the wording and everything on the site is really professional. good luck!

Do you have ANY ideas on this page?

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